Joy

5WC-The Pastry Chef

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Excellent... just makes me want to "knock boots" in the kitchen. I've never been turned on by reading about food before but I believe I'm seduced. :)
This is really good. It makes me want to know more about the Baker.
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Wow, that is really well written.
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After doing this challenge - I now understand how hard it is to craft a story that really works. Your story is excellent.
Thanks, Grumpy.
Thanks, Eunice. I'm kinda curious about this guy, too.
Thanks, Amber. I've always thought food was sensual,so why not sexy?
Thanks, Deborah.
This piece is very evocative and paints a vivid introduction to the character.
Thanks, Red Pen.

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