Amber

5 Words: Meringue, Traffic, Flowers, Social, Bill

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[this is good]
Solid and a plot arc and twist nipped inside so few words. Well done.
Yes, please, may I have some more?
After doing this challenge - I now understand how hard it is to craft a story that really works. I found your story to be so perfect. You managed to say SO MUCH with just one paragraph. I wanted more.


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